relecting on todays class monday

Today class went really well; we all broke down into our groups to discuss the latest writing assignment. We all took our turn to read our paper The email etiquette essay, to our fellow group members, once each member finished reading there essay the rest of the group gave them pointers on what to do to make there paper better. We discussed way to either shorten or lengthen our essays. We discussed different ways to write things to make them sound better. It was really good to hear what the other members of our groups thought about what we had written. Know we can go back thru our essays and add or take away things to make a better grade. The one thing that I learned was to listen to what everyone has to say because whether or not I liked it the might have been right. Also when you are doing something like that you can take it easy on them. No matter if you wand to make them mad you have to be honest with them, if not they could get a bad grade, and it would be your fault. I mean how you would feel if they just blew off the process, and you ended up with a bad grade. It could have been stopped if they would of only told you that you needed to change something so small. So all in all class was great I know what I need to change on my essay to get the grade that I deserve, and will make sure I do so by Friday.